Given that you actually named me as someone who reads the minutes
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here is my input/feedback this time around:
(1) I'd recommend spelling out "MSO" as "Member Services Office". Folks who were not at the meeting are unlikely to surmise the meaning of the acronym, especially if it is either a new title or a new con niche.
(2) Please clarify "We may not cap weekend pre-registration." Does that mean that the Board decided to deny permission to place a cap on pre-reg's? Or does it mean that a cap was set, but we might not reach that number? Or does it mean that presently, there is a date after which pre-reg's will not be accepted, but possibly, we might eliminate that deadline? Or?
(3) "Fanfic Coordinator" would be capitalized.
(4) You have: "Art contests will occur during con, and it will be posted...". I'd replace "it" with "submissions".
(5) In the paragraph beginning "Ellen announced":
(A) "Creation Station" would be capitalized.
(B) Please, let's not use the word "signups". It is the practice of having sign-up sheets outside the CS that Jaki asked us to eliminate. More in a moment....