Just to get it out of the way.... CARD GAMES ON MOTORCYCLES!
Anyway, I agree that the subtitles thing is an issue because they really take away from the video, especially when they take up half the screen. At points I feel that your clips are to slow for the music at some points. I'm certainly not telling you to do the white flash every time the snare hits, but when the chorus comes sometimes the clips feel bland for what the music is giving to you. I don't mean to say that to try to be mean or discouraging to you, but I don't really know how else to describe it. Awe, I think I just came up with a way to explain it. It's like if you piloting a jet, you can cruise along leisurely fly but you have the ability to do barrel rolls and loop de loops.
But, I will say you do have some nice syncs. And the video quality is decent (Ill chalk that part up to be that it's WMM) Keep up the good work.