Author Topic: The Spoon Castle (Read 2222463 times)

oslapedo · « **Reply #2000 on:** September 30, 2008, 04:41:07 pm »

You beat her by 80, so now I'm your next opponent!

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2001 on:** September 30, 2008, 04:43:27 pm »

queen feels outa the loop.... ah well thats what I get for multi tasking : P

oslapedo · « **Reply #2002 on:** September 30, 2008, 04:45:34 pm »

It's not much of a loop my dear. I'm just realizing that all of my awesome friends irl translate to noobs on the internet

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xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2003 on:** September 30, 2008, 04:46:56 pm »

xD Ah I see, sounds like much much fun :3 I'm writing inbetween posts >.>

oslapedo · « **Reply #2004 on:** September 30, 2008, 04:50:27 pm »

Writing what, homework? I really need to do mine T_T

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2005 on:** September 30, 2008, 04:52:14 pm »

nope I'm working on my book

and more homework?! O_O good lord you sure do get a lot >.> I get like almost none.. cept math.... -.-

oslapedo · « **Reply #2006 on:** September 30, 2008, 04:55:47 pm »

Yer makin a book? : D You should somehow involve some good old spoons!

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2007 on:** September 30, 2008, 04:57:17 pm »

I'll see what I can do :3 hard to add comedy into a big drama though >.> its a very depressing novel... its hard to jump between happy skippy lucky this and el depreso book with out mixing up the atitueds for em x.x

NightLotus · « **Reply #2008 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:02:19 pm »

lol... now i'll know why if you start being all emo mom^^

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2009 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:03:17 pm »

hey you try writing a section of a book that makes you CRY buckets and then coming and posting here >.> not easy to do

oslapedo · « **Reply #2010 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:08:26 pm »

Omg, you could be like,
"As the trauma of her dark raging past swirled in a frenzy within her sordid mind she glared intently into the spoon's metallic surface and wondered, if perhaps, the spoon could provide some sort of solace for her. Ice Cream, truly the universal unbiased median for all lost souls."

xD

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2011 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:11:06 pm »

just for you I'm going to add that >.>

oslapedo · « **Reply #2012 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:15:15 pm »

WOOT! I can't wait to read your completed book

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2013 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:24:04 pm »

x.x you and many others aprently >.>

I posted the first chapter on my live journal but no one pays attention to my live journal so no one besides my friends who ask for it really get to read it.

oslapedo · « **Reply #2014 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:25:57 pm »

I don't have a LJ but if you post a linky I'll read it : D

NightLotus · « **Reply #2015 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:28:27 pm »

me to^^

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2016 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:33:15 pm »

http://cheshare.livejournal.com/

x.x note the chapter on there is only been edited once, its still being worked on >.>

MiriaRose · « **Reply #2017 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:36:14 pm »

^^ What's the story about?

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2018 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:41:02 pm »

These kids altered at birth to geneticly be the best possibility a human can be... they are outcasted for not being "human" and forced to only attent one school, can only have certain jobs,cant marry "normal humans" ect... so a lot of them are in hiding and it follows this one girl Lily who is in hiding and betrayed by a friend in a tramtical experience that drives her to the brink of insanity... and once Lily starts to heal and grow again she falls in love with some one who is actualy a Human... but they cant mary so they take it to court.

MiriaRose · « **Reply #2019 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:43:26 pm »

Ooooh. Sounds cool!

oslapedo · « **Reply #2020 on:** September 30, 2008, 05:58:45 pm »

I'm reading it nao. So far my favorite part is this: "The only way to reach the musty room is if you bribe the janitor Burney with a tuna fish sandwich every Wednesday." xD

NightLotus · « **Reply #2021 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:01:19 pm »

i fineshed it ^^
i love it! must read more!!

MiriaRose · « **Reply #2022 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:09:07 pm »

xD I'm reading it right now. It's awesome!

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2023 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:16:01 pm »

you guys are to nice to me x.x

MiriaRose · « **Reply #2024 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:18:17 pm »

xD It really is good! There's a few spelling and captialization errors, but I really love it.

KinkyFriedChicken · « **Reply #2025 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:18:55 pm »

;_; *depressed chef* . . .

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2026 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:19:46 pm »

xD I suck at spelling.. and grammer x.x and theres a large paragraph in that first chapter Ive been meaning to take out >.>

the rest of the book isnt as good I think u.u I dunno no one has read the rest of it yet >.> (cause its stored safley in my compy)

chef what is wrong me dear?

oslapedo · « **Reply #2027 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:23:01 pm »

You want me to beta for you my dear? I'm able to asses the grammatical nuances of our language when I feel like it

Chefy, want another gold star?

KinkyFriedChicken · « **Reply #2028 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:24:27 pm »

My Mom Wont Take Me To Sakuracon And Alder, My Own Child, Wont Go Now And I Already Got The Badge For It ;-;

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2029 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:25:15 pm »

king I would love that ;_; let me e-mail you the revised version >.> and chapter two if ya wants it

and chef that sucks D:

MiriaRose · « **Reply #2030 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:25:34 pm »

That was really good. I read both parts and loved it.

Ah, Narrator.

Seraph · « **Reply #2031 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:26:33 pm »

maybe go with someone else?

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2032 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:26:42 pm »

Quote from: MiriaRose on September 30, 2008, 06:25:34 pm

That was really good. I read both parts and loved it.

Ah, Narrator.

if you couldnt tell the Narrator has some issues >.>

and thanks <3

KinkyFriedChicken · « **Reply #2033 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:27:30 pm »

I Hate My Life So Bad ;_; My Mom Makes Life Hell D':

Idk I Still Have To Get An Adult x-x Im Only 15

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2034 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:28:20 pm »

do you have a friend thats 18 and is going? ._.

oslapedo · « **Reply #2035 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:28:33 pm »

That's super poopy. I don't even know if I'm going to Sakcon yet, but it sucks that you already spent moneyz on it ;_;

Queeny you can email me at saharasooter@comcast.net or at oslapedo@hotmail.com

I'm flexible like that

MiriaRose · « **Reply #2036 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:28:47 pm »

xD I could tell. I already don't like him. >.>

And you're welcome. ^^

Seraph · « **Reply #2037 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:29:23 pm »

am I the only adult spoony?

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2038 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:29:35 pm »

Quote from: MiriaRose on September 30, 2008, 06:28:47 pm

xD I could tell. I already don't like him. >.>

And you're welcome. ^^

*cough* its a her...

and most people kinda dont like her >.> mum said she wanted to bash her skull in after reading the first chapter then realized she didnt even know the name of the narrator and yelled at me to tell her the rest of the story in detail ^^;;

NightLotus · « **Reply #2039 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:30:40 pm »

Quote from: Seraph on September 30, 2008, 06:29:23 pm

am I the only adult spoony?

mebe >> i think so actually

KinkyFriedChicken · « **Reply #2040 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:31:03 pm »

I Always Hang Out With Pple My Age >w> Idk y Probly Cuz Im Too Shy To Ask If Anyone Else Could Do Anything *doesnt even talk to techers* x-x

Aparently Seraph >w>

oslapedo · « **Reply #2041 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:32:42 pm »

I have friends of all ages, from the young to the old. All that matters to me is a person's soul, man

MiriaRose · « **Reply #2042 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:33:30 pm »

Oh, really? xD Alright. I hate her already.

Chef- I'm sorry about that. It really sucks.

Seraph · « **Reply #2043 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:34:29 pm »

sometimes I wonder if I have two souls or it simply has two sides....likely just have two sides. I am a gemini after all.

KinkyFriedChicken · « **Reply #2044 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:35:30 pm »

Ima Gemini Tew =D Anyway If I Have To When I Get My Permit I Will Drive Walk Or Hitchike For The Name Of Cosplay =3

MiriaRose · « **Reply #2045 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:36:02 pm »

I feel like that, too, Seraph.

>.> But I'm a Sag, not a Gemini.

xxxchihiroxxx · « **Reply #2046 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:36:55 pm »

Miria: ^^;; dont worry if it makes it better her life is HELL after what she did to Lily >.> course she continues to make Lily's life worse and worse.... -_- I swear she is the stupidst girl in the whole world.

NightLotus · « **Reply #2047 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:37:12 pm »

I'm WAY older than my age... lol
kate and I are like a week away from being Gemini!!! it would be so cool to be gemini... but we're Taurus instead yay for 5/15 ^^

MiriaRose · « **Reply #2048 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:37:55 pm »

HAH! In ur face Narrator! IN UR FACE!

. . Sorry. I had to. xD

Seraph · « **Reply #2049 on:** September 30, 2008, 06:39:05 pm »

so you could been twins in the astrology sense as well lotus?

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