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Offline TanisNikana

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Short story contest!
« on: October 13, 2008, 10:25:34 pm »
And when I say "short", I mean really freaking short.

20 words is your upper limit. Not a single word more. Want a taste of that? Here's a sample:

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"Don't worry," said the weatherman. The next day: rain. The day after: floods. And then the water supplies cut off.

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The last man on earth was alone in a room. There was a lock on the door.

As you can see, 20 words or less is really tight. And the winner gets a prize from me.

Oh, and I'm the judge.

Go!

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2008, 10:34:13 pm »
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They thought everything was okay. Until they locked themselves in the car. The keys were on the outside.
Thats 18.
 
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The frisbee whisked through the air, unhindered by gravity. For a few seconds, it was free. Until the squirrel struck.
Thats 20.
Lol....
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Offline TanisNikana

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #2 on: October 13, 2008, 10:37:43 pm »
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A funny thing happens when people eat their pets: Billy from down the street wonders where his lovable Rover went.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #3 on: October 13, 2008, 10:41:19 pm »
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Two boys played catch quietly. The ball went into their neighbor's yard. They went to get it. Never seen again.
20!

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How many spammers does it take to break the internet? The world may never find out..... Or will they?
*cackle* 19.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #4 on: October 13, 2008, 10:41:47 pm »
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Once upon a time, there was me, and I was awesome. Still am to this day. And will forever be!

Story of my life in exactly 20 words. :D
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Offline TanisNikana

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #5 on: October 13, 2008, 10:46:30 pm »
(By the way, you're competing against me, a la Win Ben Stein's Money.)

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #6 on: October 13, 2008, 10:51:34 pm »
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We pranced happily to elections. Little did we know our ride would be two hours late! The night was cold.
Um, 20 i think.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #7 on: October 13, 2008, 10:52:37 pm »
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She was left in the cold, her parents uncaring. Her friends took care in seeing her home, keeping her safe.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #8 on: October 13, 2008, 10:54:54 pm »
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She felt bad about her friend waiting in the cold with her. But atleast he got to see his movie.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #9 on: October 13, 2008, 10:55:27 pm »
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"Write a story!" exclaimed Bacon Cheeseburger man. "The worse that happens is that I win and you all get nothing!"

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #10 on: October 13, 2008, 10:57:30 pm »
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Dim light in the darkness, about to be snuffed along with every human life. Everyone tries to ignore it.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #11 on: October 13, 2008, 10:58:53 pm »
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A modern day Cinderella, she cleaned all day. Her mom brought crab, and stories. She stayed in her room.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #12 on: October 13, 2008, 10:59:03 pm »
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #13 on: October 13, 2008, 11:00:09 pm »
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Friendship: easily defined by how many ramunes your friends give you.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #14 on: October 13, 2008, 11:00:16 pm »
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If ignorance is bliss, why am I being shunned for my ignorance? Is it bliss? Is knowledge power as well?
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #15 on: October 13, 2008, 11:01:40 pm »
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #16 on: October 13, 2008, 11:02:37 pm »
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #17 on: October 13, 2008, 11:03:12 pm »
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The tomato plant in the kitchen had been trying to grow all summer. It grew a tomato. Om nom nom.
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Offline TanisNikana

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #18 on: October 13, 2008, 11:05:46 pm »
Remember, can't just be a clever quote, needs to be a story.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #19 on: October 13, 2008, 11:06:01 pm »
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They collapsed in a pile. No one survived the attack. Aww damn, I have to start at level one now.
W00t!
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #20 on: October 13, 2008, 11:07:17 pm »
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The story is simple. Tanis is the only one that can anyone. Don't me? Just him.
« Last Edit: October 13, 2008, 11:07:56 pm by CatchxMe »

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #21 on: October 13, 2008, 11:11:37 pm »
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In the future, there will be four thousand three hundred and twenty six channels. But no yaoi.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #22 on: October 13, 2008, 11:14:49 pm »
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"Don't think this will be easy," the man with the glasses said. "The REAL training starts tomorrow." He paced.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #23 on: October 13, 2008, 11:19:01 pm »
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"Good night," she whispered into the dark. The ghost before her nodded and smiled. She dreamed of him that night.
Bah, dreampt? Dreamt? Dreamed? Drempt? Whats the proper tense?
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #24 on: October 13, 2008, 11:19:41 pm »
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There once was a unicorn named Charlie. He lost his kidney.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #25 on: October 13, 2008, 11:21:38 pm »
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There was once a blind man who was playing Truth-or-Dare. He was dared to read off the rules.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #26 on: October 13, 2008, 11:22:51 pm »
Dreamt and dreamed are both valid forms.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #27 on: October 13, 2008, 11:24:00 pm »
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"Lend me a hand!" yelled the man with no arms as he lifted the dresser.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #28 on: October 13, 2008, 11:26:32 pm »
Dude, you're a mod. Now how about a decent story?

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #29 on: October 14, 2008, 12:06:20 am »
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The two squared off glaring eagerly at one another, this fight would decide everyhting though neither would take it seriously.

thats meh story
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #30 on: October 14, 2008, 07:11:27 am »
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The morning light peaked over the horizon. Time for school. There is an assignment due in spanish.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #31 on: October 14, 2008, 02:04:52 pm »
Seeking moar entries!

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #32 on: October 14, 2008, 04:02:57 pm »
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School is over. There is no homework. PSAT's are tomorrow. I am nervous. I will do my best.
Meow!
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #33 on: October 15, 2008, 07:26:27 pm »
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He left her, dying lips promising that they would reunite. She waited. She died. They met again, finally together forever.

Twenty words exactly. ^^
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #34 on: October 15, 2008, 07:27:19 pm »

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He left his angel, dying lips promising they would reunite. She waited. She died. They met again, finally together forever.

Twenty words exactly. ^^
« Last Edit: October 15, 2008, 07:27:51 pm by Mitsukai Mizu Amaya »
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #35 on: October 15, 2008, 07:34:06 pm »
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The glass exploded. Blood dripped from her fingers. 'Oops' she said

11! ^^

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #36 on: October 15, 2008, 08:31:55 pm »
Let me tell you a story about a man named Jed: lost it all, and shot his fam'ly dead.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #37 on: October 15, 2008, 09:07:24 pm »
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Emily found out too late that her friends were like potatoes. When you eat them, they die.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #38 on: October 15, 2008, 09:09:12 pm »
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She was being ignored by her own family. So she left the castle. Armed with only a keyboard and mouse.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #39 on: October 15, 2008, 09:10:45 pm »
@Hazu:

I KNEW YOU WERE A CANNIBAL! Only cannibals are that awesome.  :o

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #40 on: October 15, 2008, 09:13:39 pm »
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They scanned the street from a dark rooftop. Looking for their first unlucky victim. CatchxMe never saw them attack.
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #41 on: October 15, 2008, 09:14:57 pm »
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She thought it was only her shadow. But shadows don't growl. Poor DemonSpawn.

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« Reply #42 on: October 15, 2008, 09:16:55 pm »
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A girl ran through the streets screaming. A lamp revealed her as CatchxMe. "Poor girl." Someone called. "Drugs did that."
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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #43 on: October 15, 2008, 09:19:08 pm »
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One day a baby was born. Her name was DemonSpawn. "Well," The doctor said, "At least it's alive." 

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #44 on: October 15, 2008, 09:20:51 pm »
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"Ugh, what IS that?!" Someone gasped in horror as a shape came out of the sewer. "That's CatchxMe." Someone replied.
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« Reply #45 on: October 15, 2008, 09:22:47 pm »
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This story is about the secret of Halloween: To let DemonSpawn blend in.

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« Reply #46 on: October 15, 2008, 09:24:57 pm »
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"Picture butterflies. Calming huh?" He said. "Now picture the most horrid thing you've ever seen. That's CatchxMe. Scary, isn't it?"
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« Reply #47 on: October 15, 2008, 09:26:07 pm »
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"Yes that is scary!" said a random extra oslapedo, who didn't really know what was going on.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #48 on: October 15, 2008, 09:27:10 pm »
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DemonSpawn: The story of a duck and turtle crossbreed.

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Re: Short story contest!
« Reply #49 on: October 15, 2008, 09:30:10 pm »
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CatchXMe cried all alone. No one wanted to see her. They said she was scary. She didn't understand.
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