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Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« on: February 03, 2009, 07:50:43 pm »
Chapter 1

From the first time that Jill had actually met Sahara she always felt that she wanted to be with her. They had become good friends by talking online and found that they had tons in common with each other. They both loved talking to each other, generally about nothing at all.

They had arranged to meet up one Saturday for the first time with a bunch of their friends. Jill was nervous with anticipation the whole time. Would Sahara still be the same? Would Sahara ever be able to like her back? As soon as they saw each other Jill rushed into Sahara's arms because she was starting to feel weak. Here was this beautiful girl that she had become close friends with, but she just couldn't tell her how she actually felt. The time they spent together was the most amazing few hours of Jill's life. She just couldn't let go of Sahara. She was the most perfect girl she had ever known and Jill never wanted it to end.

Another few months went by of Jill concealing her feeling and becoming closer friends with Sahara. She still hopped that some day Sahara would learn to love her as Jill did. And then that day finally came, Jill was talking on the phone with Sahara and she was being unsually quiet.

"Is something wrong?", asked Jill in a concerned tone.

"It's nothing really," Sahara responded, "I've just had a lot on my mind recently." She paused. "Do you know what it's like to have feelings for someone that you never know will work out?"

Jill felt like she had been stabbed in the heart. How could someone that she had shown nothing but love and affection to for the past three months like someone else?!

"Yah... I kind know what you mean," Jill responded trying to hold in the anger that was building up inside of her.

"It's just... Do you promise not to say anything hurtful if I tell you about it?"

"I would never hurt you Sahara, you're one of my closest friends."

"Well Jill... I don't know really how to say this... But I like you. I like you a lot. You've shown me how much you love me and I just know that I couldn't live without you."

Jill almost fainted right there. She couldn't believe that all her dreams had come true. They talked for hours that night, planning out everything. They were going to meet up in downtown Portland the next weekend and spend their first time together as a couple.

[To be continued!]

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2009, 07:52:33 pm »
YOU HAVE ISSUES.
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2009, 07:54:06 pm »
As much as I want to hate this... it made me 'lol! :D

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #3 on: February 03, 2009, 07:54:24 pm »
IT'S CUTE IF YOU CHANGE THE NAMES, THOUGH.

BUT YOU STILL HAVE ISSUES! Dx
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #4 on: February 03, 2009, 07:54:29 pm »
YOU ARE AMAZING PATRICK
I LOVE YOU THAT MUCH MORE NOW ;D
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2009, 07:54:41 pm »
I AM NO PANSY ASS!

D: < and WE ARE NOT A COUPLE

how many times must I say this?

and a third thing, it went nothing like that. It was suposed to but Tanis ruined everything -_-
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #6 on: February 03, 2009, 07:56:18 pm »
YOU ARE AN EVIL EVIL MAN

what is this rated anyways?!
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #7 on: February 03, 2009, 07:56:24 pm »
Oh and yes, I'll back up Jill here, we're not a couple.

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #8 on: February 03, 2009, 07:56:35 pm »
HAY OSLA, MAMA~

WOULDN'T A HUGE MULTI-PART PAT/TANIS FANFICTION BE FUNNY? WE COULD MESH ALL THE ONES CIRCULATING INTO ONE! :3
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #9 on: February 03, 2009, 07:58:49 pm »
Oh and yes, I'll back up Jill here, we're not a couple.

Miria: I'm writing my own! If patricks reviving his Hentai fan girls I'll revive my Yaoi fan girls!

Sahara: yeah, what is with these people all saying were a couple? sheesh their crazy -_-

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #10 on: February 03, 2009, 07:58:50 pm »
EWWW

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #11 on: February 03, 2009, 07:59:11 pm »
I think I'll stay away from the forums for a while. x.x

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« Reply #12 on: February 03, 2009, 08:01:01 pm »
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« Reply #13 on: February 03, 2009, 08:02:23 pm »
YOU ARE AN EVIL EVIL MAN

what is this rated anyways?!

The whole thing will be NC-17 but I'll stop at the PG stuff here~

You have my interest.

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #14 on: February 03, 2009, 08:03:14 pm »
LIES

IT IS THE TRUTH DARN YOU!!! D: <

WELL YOU GUYS "START" BEING OFFICIAL AT THE DANCE. SO I THINK WE'RE CLOSE ENOUGH.

NO WE WILL NOT BECOME A COUPLE AT THE DANCE
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« Reply #15 on: February 03, 2009, 08:04:35 pm »
Why wait till the dance? :D

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« Reply #16 on: February 03, 2009, 08:05:03 pm »
YOU ARE AN EVIL EVIL MAN

what is this rated anyways?!

The whole thing will be NC-17 but I'll stop at the PG stuff here~

You have my interest.
NOT MINE. >:O

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #17 on: February 03, 2009, 08:06:09 pm »

They had arranged to meet up one Saturday for the first time with a bunch of their friends. Jill was nervous with anticipation the whole time. Would Sahara still be the same? Would Sahara ever be able to like her back? As soon as they saw each other Jill rushed into Sahara's arms because she was starting to feel weak. Here was this beautiful girl that she had become close friends with, but she just couldn't tell her how she actually felt. The time they spent together was the most amazing few hours of Jill's life. She just couldn't let go of Sahara. She was the most perfect girl she had ever known and Jill never wanted it to end.
I read that was 'Would Sahara ever be able to lick her back?'

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« Reply #18 on: February 03, 2009, 08:07:03 pm »
LIES

IT IS THE TRUTH DARN YOU!!! D: <

WELL YOU GUYS "START" BEING OFFICIAL AT THE DANCE. SO I THINK WE'RE CLOSE ENOUGH.

NO WE WILL NOT BECOME A COUPLE AT THE DANCE

AT THE MEETUP THEN. THAT'S WHAT YOU TOLD ME.

STAY OUT OF MY PERSONAL LIFE! ) : <

Sahara: >/ / /<
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« Reply #19 on: February 03, 2009, 08:07:39 pm »

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« Reply #20 on: February 03, 2009, 08:07:40 pm »
=3

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« Reply #21 on: February 03, 2009, 08:11:35 pm »
I can't wait until we get to the mecha! Girls and their mecha! It's so hot!
Have Fun

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« Reply #22 on: February 03, 2009, 08:11:42 pm »

They had arranged to meet up one Saturday for the first time with a bunch of their friends. Jill was nervous with anticipation the whole time. Would Sahara still be the same? Would Sahara ever be able to like her back? As soon as they saw each other Jill rushed into Sahara's arms because she was starting to feel weak. Here was this beautiful girl that she had become close friends with, but she just couldn't tell her how she actually felt. The time they spent together was the most amazing few hours of Jill's life. She just couldn't let go of Sahara. She was the most perfect girl she had ever known and Jill never wanted it to end.
I read that was 'Would Sahara ever be able to lick her back?'
LOLOLOL >:]

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #23 on: February 03, 2009, 08:13:14 pm »
Lotus how can you be so cruel as to suport this?!

Jay: NOW WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO DO THAT?!

Pat: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU THINKING NOW?!
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« Reply #24 on: February 03, 2009, 08:14:35 pm »
Pat: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU THINKING NOW?!

IT'S A SECRET. YOU SHALL SEE!

I DONT WANT TO SEE
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #25 on: February 03, 2009, 08:14:45 pm »
OHGAWD WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU GUYS?
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« Reply #26 on: February 03, 2009, 08:14:57 pm »
INORITE?

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« Reply #27 on: February 03, 2009, 08:14:58 pm »
@ everyone, T.T

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« Reply #28 on: February 03, 2009, 08:15:19 pm »

They had arranged to meet up one Saturday for the first time with a bunch of their friends. Jill was nervous with anticipation the whole time. Would Sahara still be the same? Would Sahara ever be able to like her back? As soon as they saw each other Jill rushed into Sahara's arms because she was starting to feel weak. Here was this beautiful girl that she had become close friends with, but she just couldn't tell her how she actually felt. The time they spent together was the most amazing few hours of Jill's life. She just couldn't let go of Sahara. She was the most perfect girl she had ever known and Jill never wanted it to end.
I read that was 'Would Sahara ever be able to lick her back?'
LMAO! Win.

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #29 on: February 03, 2009, 08:15:44 pm »
Lotus how can you be so cruel as to suport this?!

I LOLED
AND HOW DARE YOU PAIR MY DARLING PATRICK WITH TANIS!!! >:[
(is still angry)

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« Reply #30 on: February 03, 2009, 08:16:18 pm »
Lotus how can you be so cruel as to suport this?!

I LOLED
AND HOW DARE YOU PAIR MY DARLING PATRICK WITH TANIS!!! >:[
(is still angry)
HE STARTED IT, THOUGH.
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #31 on: February 03, 2009, 08:16:44 pm »
So who all has two mommies?
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #32 on: February 03, 2009, 08:17:31 pm »
Tanis x Pat ftw~

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #33 on: February 03, 2009, 08:17:53 pm »
Lotus: BUT HE WROTE DIRTY THINGS OF ME AND SAHARA FIRST
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #34 on: February 03, 2009, 08:18:20 pm »
So who all has two mommies?
==;; Osla's the husband in their relationship. So she's the DADDY.

osla, Tanis/Pat ftfw.
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #35 on: February 03, 2009, 08:19:10 pm »
I think relationships should be dealt with, with the people involved in them. If two people have affection towards eachother, it doesnt need to be exploided. THIS IS A PUBLIC FORUM GUYS. I don't know if this is a very good way to treat friends, and EVEN THOUGH IT'S NOT MY BUSINESS, maybe we should respect others feelings?
Sorry, my opinion, dun want to ruin your guys's fun.
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #36 on: February 03, 2009, 08:19:14 pm »
Lotus: BUT HE WROTE DIRTY THINGS OF ME AND SAHARA FIRST

BUT TANIS MOTHER!
TANIS!??!?!!?!?!?! >:[

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #37 on: February 03, 2009, 08:20:16 pm »
Shay's just weirded out because she's my sister =,D

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #38 on: February 03, 2009, 08:21:01 pm »
well it is our private relationship... i would prefer it not be plastered on the forums...

i'm just fighting fire with fire.

lotus: YES TANIS
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #39 on: February 03, 2009, 08:22:30 pm »
TANIS + PATRICK = YAOI LULZ

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #40 on: February 03, 2009, 08:22:57 pm »
Shay's just weirded out because she's my sister =,D
I'm not wierded out at all! :O
I don't want to see people getting hurt, or any friendships getting wounded.

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #41 on: February 03, 2009, 08:24:46 pm »
How about this:
I know teasing is fun but just make sure not to take it too far. Yes, despite popular belief, sometimes teasing hurts.
Public matters may be discussed, private matters should stay private.
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #42 on: February 03, 2009, 08:24:58 pm »
And I'm too insensitive to notice v-v

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« Reply #43 on: February 03, 2009, 08:26:12 pm »
>:
Goodnight everyone.
Time for bed nao.

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #44 on: February 03, 2009, 08:29:50 pm »
And I still got 2 1/2 hours of work to go.

So do the zombies kill them in the Salmon street fountain?
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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #45 on: February 03, 2009, 08:30:20 pm »
I think this is all pretty silly but if Jill has a problem with it then it'd stop being alright ;3

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #46 on: February 03, 2009, 08:30:34 pm »
Goodnight Shay!
"Would you kindly. ."

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Re: Sahara X Jill (A slashfic intro)
« Reply #47 on: February 03, 2009, 08:34:41 pm »
night shay

Sahara: no major problem I just dont like it... -_- if he posts things rated M then i'm going to punch him for real
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« Reply #48 on: February 03, 2009, 08:35:06 pm »
oh my....I dun know what to think of this.......o_o
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« Reply #49 on: February 03, 2009, 08:36:37 pm »
He won't post R things... he better not >_<